Trying a different form

Trying my hand at writing ' Haiku' ( free form), so please guys will appreciate any constructive feedback. The below is a result after many many attempts, don't even know if it's making sense.

Interestingly this post was in the draft section of the blog since 16/02/08 @10:59.

Free form haiku may have more or less than three lines and contain less than 17 syllables. It may use traditional poetic devices such as rhyme, metaphor, alliteration, simile, and others. The free form haiku may be humorous and cute, teasing and erotic, or it may have a didactic message. - http://ezinearticles.com/?How-To-Write-Haiku-Poetry&id=127977

Alone

Bare tree
middle of the garden
tall and lonely

Sea

Sea played

hide and seek

rising and dropping

City

Satudary morning

a cup of hot coffee

staring at the busy street