The title might have got some of you interested enough to read this post….ah tricked you didn’t I? Oh c’mon u people smile even if you don’t think it’s funny….Gosh sometimes I wonder where all the humour has gone…..I caught a glimpse of this stunning creature, while we were visiting the Half Moon Bay in
So here goes another poem
Lying there in all its grandeur
I looked at her and pondered
Never have I seen something so beautiful
All so glamorous and admirable
Colourful and elegant she looked
Leaving me mesmerised and hooked
Stars of the sea they are proudly called
Now I know why everybody is so fond…….
© Trina Sarkar-Mohapatra, all rights reserved
6 comments:
mesmerized by the star of the sea ..... well good thought, never did i think abt it ....... good attempt on the poetry tho'
i like the poem simple & sweet,
now listen to my version
Lying there in all its grandeur
I looked at HIM and pondered
Never have I seen anything so GRACEFUL
All so glamorous and admirable
Colourful and elegant HE looked
Leaving ALL mesmerised and hooked
STAR of the sea HE'S proudly called
Now I know why everyone is so fond…….
but i think your version's better.. so keep writing
I like this side to you. Always envied those that could be arsed writing poetry - my dad started writing after his divorce and he tells me he´s now done over 300 of them.
If not for fame, then at least it can be theraputic :)
Was gonna comment on that creature but since anything to do with water freaks me out I think I´ll leave it :)
Wow Trina, wonderful photography. Your fan, Soham, is watching the starfish from last half an hour, so you know i can't type anymore for today! Keep writing poems, i like it.
I love u guys, keep reading n commenting :)
Sutapa I didn't take that picture, damn missed out on another compliment...:)
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